The demon stops at the second page, in either PC or computer. I don't know if its intentional. But the second page has no next option or anything to continue.
I hope I don't sound rude saying this, but it's a bit hard to "like" something when there's barely content. I think you should try and write at least one chapter if this a demo or a WIP.
Because people with genuily thing your game is bugged, if you only offer them three or two pages and then abruptly cut it.
A bit of polishing in that area, I feel it would help you get comments and get people to like it?
I get your point, this is my first time writing an if and didn’t realise people might think it’s bugged! I’m working on the first chapter, hopefully it won’t take me much time.Thank you for your comment❤️
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oh dear, I feel with our MC :( and hopefully we can rescue some of the servants from our mother-in-law xD I'm looking forward to more <3
Very unique concept
Very nice start, although short, this feels like the type of story I could find myself immersed in.
The demon stops at the second page, in either PC or computer. I don't know if its intentional. But the second page has no next option or anything to continue.
Hi! The demo is currently only three pages (I know it’s very very very short sorry) hope you liked it so far!
I hope I don't sound rude saying this, but it's a bit hard to "like" something when there's barely content. I think you should try and write at least one chapter if this a demo or a WIP.
Because people with genuily thing your game is bugged, if you only offer them three or two pages and then abruptly cut it.
A bit of polishing in that area, I feel it would help you get comments and get people to like it?
I get your point, this is my first time writing an if and didn’t realise people might think it’s bugged! I’m working on the first chapter, hopefully it won’t take me much time.Thank you for your comment❤️